Comments on: The World’s Gonna Die if http://annavera.com/poems/types/war-poems/worlds-gonna-die/ Poetry by Anna Vera Williams Tue, 01 Nov 2011 11:04:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Spain http://annavera.com/poems/types/war-poems/worlds-gonna-die/comment-page-1/#comment-22784 Spain Thu, 08 Sep 2011 10:09:46 +0000 http://annavera.com/poems/?p=102#comment-22784 More or less I agree with you More or less I agree with you

]]> By: Mary http://annavera.com/poems/types/war-poems/worlds-gonna-die/comment-page-1/#comment-12529 Mary Sun, 31 Jul 2011 06:59:07 +0000 http://annavera.com/poems/?p=102#comment-12529 This was the second time I read this poem, and I was excited to find that I realized something new from it, that is the word "if" in fact gives us numerous kinds of possibilities, such as we can scream, dream and we can do many things. What really matters is we must do something, otherwise the world may truly die. This was the second time I read this poem, and I was excited to find that I realized something new from it, that is the word “if” in fact gives us numerous kinds of possibilities, such as we can scream, dream and we can do many things. What really matters is we must do something, otherwise the world may truly die.

]]> By: Sara http://annavera.com/poems/types/war-poems/worlds-gonna-die/comment-page-1/#comment-227 Sara Fri, 29 Feb 2008 00:28:00 +0000 http://annavera.com/poems/?p=102#comment-227 I'm not feeling the two uses of Bls Bla Bla. I think the poem would be stronger without that. Because this part is intense and really good:<br/>I can scream<br/>For death and hell;<br/>It doesn't go away.<br/><br/>I can dream<br/>That all is well.<br/>It doesn't make you stay. I’m not feeling the two uses of Bls Bla Bla. I think the poem would be stronger without that. Because this part is intense and really good:
I can scream
For death and hell;
It doesn’t go away.

I can dream
That all is well.
It doesn’t make you stay.

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