Comments on: The Story of the Pug

By: Office Supplies

Office Supplies — Fri, 14 May 2010 13:08:33 +0000

First of all Anna, the poem was fantastic! Loved the ending especially. Secondly, I think you should pursue writing other literature, like short stories. I think you could do a fantastic job of that, you really developed that poem like a story. Thumbs up!

By: Anna

Anna — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 04:46:22 +0000

Thanks for your feedback Rajeev :_ I am sorry, I have just been really busy with work but I will be back. All is well.

By: Rajeev

Rajeev — Fri, 13 Nov 2009 15:42:53 +0000

Its nice to have such simple poems.. so less complicated and yet so beautiful..its very lively and the storys good. But where are you now? I was at your freepoems blog and really I havent seen any recent works. Please keep up the good work.

By: Ario

Ario — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 21:30:00 +0000

Finally have had a chance to read this in peace and quiet.

Absolutely fantastic.

You seem on a roll with your poetry at the moment, Anna.

By: janetleigh

janetleigh — Sat, 23 Feb 2008 15:19:00 +0000

What a marvelous read this is, Anna. You have a great poem here but you also have a great children’s book here, too, if you were to pursue this idea! Have you thought about submitting this to a publisher of children’s books? Please don’t take this wrong, Anna. I’m not saying it’s childish but it does have child-like qualities to the message. It’s got a universal message and language that children can relate to – wonderful vivid images, too!

I love it to bits, Anna!

By: Anna

Anna — Fri, 15 Feb 2008 23:21:00 +0000

Thank you paisley! I am so backlogged on answering comments et al, I have been busy fighting and fuming and my internet connection isn’t very helpful. Thanks for the cheerleading.

By: paisley

paisley — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 20:09:00 +0000

bravo!!! little pugs are ever so beautiful and unique… i am so glad she has prevailed and grown into her little puggly beauty!!!!

By: noahthegreat

noahthegreat — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 02:59:00 +0000

Yeah, I don’t understand the situation, but I think I can get a lot of it out of the writing.

It’s really good.

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Sat, 09 Feb 2008 16:26:00 +0000

Okay that was a fantastic poem Anna, I think it describes the situation perfectly. All I can say is that i wish that other readers had the inside scoop, as I have never seen a more apt translation of a true life situation. I guess I am fortunate in knowing the inside story.