Comments on: Dust in the Earth

By: Dry Fogger

Dry Fogger — Mon, 21 Feb 2011 04:35:13 +0000

Awesome lines and i really love the poem. Thanks for sharing it with us.

By: Anna

Anna — Sat, 13 Nov 2010 06:06:06 +0000

Not hate, anger maybe. I never hated you.

By: Alejandro

Alejandro — Sat, 13 Nov 2010 05:21:02 +0000

I see the fury of your feelings when you wrote it, even with all the apparent hate, your love surpassed your hatred. it is clear when you read it that there was more love than anything………. a dear friend of mine told me once,,,,, what a beautiful sadness..

By: Five Ways to Write Better Poetry

Five Ways to Write Better Poetry — Mon, 10 Aug 2009 04:16:14 +0000

[...] is an example from a poem I wrote (called Dust in the Earth): Yours is the voice of the enemy – Cold is your clutch on my soul. Strange are the words [...]

By: soulwitness

soulwitness — Mon, 24 Dec 2007 09:54:00 +0000

Killer lines I must say, Dark and filled with brooding

By: writerwoman

writerwoman — Sat, 27 Oct 2007 12:52:00 +0000

These are really powerful lines!

For you leave me for reasons Satanic;
You leave me to follow your death.